Dear John

The story is about a man, named John. John is a soldier, and he lives with his dad, and he loves to surf, because that brings him comfort. His dad is a little bit crazy. John and his dad, are collecting coins, and has a lot of them.

One day, John was looking out over the water, there was 4 people talking on the same bridge. 2 girls, and 2 girls, but suddenly one of girls bag went down in the water, because one of the boys, was pushing to it. John saw it, and jumped down in the water, and got the bag. The girl, was running down to the water, and was ready to say thanks to John, when he got up. She was very grateful and they were talking very much for some days. And two weeks later, they were together. There relationship was a little bit difficult. Savanna, likes John's dad, but she could see that he was a little bit weird, and told john it, John went mad, and was walking away from her. Some of her friends tried to stop John, but that was a stupid idea, and john was fighting with some boys. One day John bought an ice cream, and he got a very expensive and special coin. That coin was so much worth, so they just kept it safe, and from that day, his dad collected coins. He collected it so much, that one day John went very, very angry, and said that he always would talk about shitty coins, and that made his dad sad, but he couldn’t not do anything.
After some weeks John should work again in the military. They were writing day in, and day out, but one day, it was over, Savannah had found someone else. John went mad, and traveled home to talk with her. Some days after, his dad went sick, and was about to die. John, read the letter to his dad, and they were both crying, and a little bit after, his dad was gone.